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Topic 146 : 描寫人多只懂得寫 ‘There are a lot of people.’ ?

描寫人多擁擠,中文有「水泄不通」、「熙來攘往」、「肩摩接踵」等。同樣地,英文也有不少佳句(見附圖)。小朋友在寫作時活用不同的描寫,能令文章生色不少!👍👍
圖片來源:"Building Strategies: Vocabulary and Writing" Book 4
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Topic 136 : 描寫生氣和打架 (註:打架是不應鼓勵的,所以在文章最後一定要加上「得到的教訓」”lesson learnt”)

除了 I am angry / we are fighting 外,小朋友可學多幾句佳句,在寫作時靈活運用呀!
1. They yelled at each other. 他們互相喊叫。
2. They called each other names. 他們在對罵。
3. They fought like cat and dog. 他們爭吵不休。
4. They shoved each other hard. 他們互相推撞。
5. They were fighting fiercely. 他們發生激烈的打架。
圖片來源:Building Strategies: Vocabulary and Writing Book 5
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Topic 133 : 描寫肚子餓

除了 I am hungry 外,小朋友可學多幾句佳句,在寫作時靈活運用呀!
1. We were starving! 我們餓得要命!
2. Our stomachs were rumbling. 我們的肚子正咕嚕咕嚕地叫!
3. The delicious smell made my mouth water. 我餓得口水直流!
4. I licked my lips hungrily. 我餓得舔舔嘴唇。
圖片來源:Building Strategies: Vocabulary and Writing Book 4
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Topic 123:描寫哭只懂說 ’I am sad/crying’?!

多記一些佳句,在作文時使用,能令文章生色不少!
He was crying loudly. (運用副詞 ’loudly’)
He was sobbing. (運用更佳的同義詞 ‘sobbing’)
His face was wet with tears. (運用更佳的短語 ‘wet with tears’)
Tears streamed down her face. (運用誇張 ‘streamed’)
‘I want my mum!’ she wailed. (運用轉述動詞 ‘wailed’)
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Topic 112: 描寫驚訝 🙀

小三或以上作文很多時要形容驚訝的樣子,同學可記住以下其中幾句,在作文時運用:

1. I am surprised.
2. I am astonished.
3. I yell in surprise.
4. My mouth falls open.
5. I stare open-mouthed at (something/somebody).
6. I am shocked (surprised and upset).
7. I am startled (surprised and a bit frightened).

*6-7 也帶有其他感情,要用得適當才可呀!

圖片來源:’Building Strategies: Vocabulary and Writing’ Book 3

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Topic 109: 作文時,寫生氣只懂得用 angry?😡

形容生氣的例子有:

形容詞有:I was angry / cross / furious / mad.
動詞有:I folded my arms. / I glared at him. / I stared at him.
比喻有:Her face was like thunder. / He was as angry as a bull.

圖片來源:’Building Strategies: Vocabulary and Writing’ Book 5

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Topic 108: 作文只懂用 ‘said’😨

英作跟中作一樣,可以用語言描寫表達角色的心情或性格。我們應該用不同的 saying verbs,以加強說話者的情感,如:

回答:answered, replied
建議:suggested, advised
命令:ordered
歉意:apologised
同意:agreed
懇求:begged
傷心地説:sobbed, cried
興奮地説:laughed, exclaimed
震驚地説:exclaimed
抱怨地説:groaned
取笑:jeered, teased
輕聲說:whispered
喃喃自語:murmured, muttered

例: ‘I have to stay at home. I have so much homework to do,’ groaned Peter.

注意: 説話內容 (’...’) 再加上說話者(groaned Peter) 才是一句完整句子,所以 ‘I have so much homework to do’ 後要用 comma (,) 不應用 full stop (.)

圖片來源:’Building Strategies: Vocabulary and Writing’ Book 5

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Topic 99: 描寫傷心

作文描述傷心,單是 sad 和 upset 是不夠的。同學不妨多記一兩句好句,在作文時發揮,可令文章生色不少!

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